I only said that the story is not very realistic, and I don´t think that that makes me a hater.

That said, I do agree with the author of the last post.

I don´t see any reason why such an innocent little story should be put down here on this forum as if the writer had seriously aimed at the Nobel Prize for Literature, and miserably failed.

Who cares about character and flow here when in reality all of us are just waiting for the descriptions of very long hair, and for the moments or passages where it becomes an explicit element of sexual arousal and pleasure?