Re: New long hair Story - The lonely librarian

by Mart

Hey, thanks for sharing! I liked the story, but I have to agree with some of the critisism regarding the AI images.


Moreover, excuse me if you didn't use it, but I think I recognize the AI writing style in some sentences. By all means, go ahead, but I find that it gives these poetic, nice sounding, but completely hollow and kind of abstract frases. Not engaging at all, just fillers.


A woman masturbating and getting turned on by her own thick mane is explicit.

So be explicit. Write exactly what she is doing with all that hair, all the dirty details.


I feel AI just can't do that (yet), because it doesn't really understand what excites the reader. I rather read a story that is kind of badly written but just says what it wants to say, than one littered with these beautiful poetic sounding, but vague/ kind of meaningless sentences.


I think I also read one of your earlier stories where you didn't use AI. I liked them a lot better. Just my two cents.